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Always Stop to Love Them by ~Yaakova:iconYaakova:



"I am yourself
From the future,"
It said.

Short hair, green eyes
Pale skin dressed in
Spandex.

"Regrets, I have
And suggestions."
Wrung hands.

"Let your first boy
Eat 'til he hurts,
Sugar.

"Do not give them
A computer
Alone.

"Teach them to be
Honest and fair,
Always.

"Only yell if
Necessary.
Be calm.

"Television,
Babysitter
It's not.

"Forget your work
A week per month,
Family.

"Do not laugh at
Silly stories;
Just smile.

"Believe in them,
No matter the
Challenge.

"Most important
Always stop to
Love them."

She disappears
In her machine,
Finished.
©2008 ~Yaakova
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The assignment was to make a list of the things you don't want to do with your children that your parents do. I took the instructions with a dash of salt and put my own spin on it. The format is weird because I like to experiment.

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~CerealKiller0:iconCerealKiller0: Mar 11, 2008, 8:58:27 PM
I think its really good. I like your poems. =D

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